Almost perfect, and I’m going to be rude and offer unsolicited, hopefully constructive, criticism: when the second boob appears it’s not immediately clear which one is which because the first one keeps switching between left and right between panels. Otherwise excellent.
Yeah, I did figure it out after taking another look. It’s not ideal though for your comic to make readers have to figure out who’s who and where in a panel (unless there’s some effect you want to achieve, like disorientation - rules are meant to be broken after all). Compare the 180 degrees rule in movie making (which is also true in comics).
Almost perfect, and I’m going to be rude and offer unsolicited, hopefully constructive, criticism: when the second boob appears it’s not immediately clear which one is which because the first one keeps switching between left and right between panels. Otherwise excellent.
The boob in the 4th and right side of the 5th panels are identical, as are the 2nd and right side of the 6th.
Yeah, I did figure it out after taking another look. It’s not ideal though for your comic to make readers have to figure out who’s who and where in a panel (unless there’s some effect you want to achieve, like disorientation - rules are meant to be broken after all). Compare the 180 degrees rule in movie making (which is also true in comics).
All boobs are unique and beautiful in themselves
It was immediately obvious to Me
Good job.
Thanks, friend!